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The sun it shines,
Upon your hair,
Which makes any guy,
Just stop and stare.

I guess I was one,
But there where hundreds more,
Who seeked your attention,
But they where all shown the door.

The first time we met,
I caught on to things pretty slow,
But after a while I knew to myself,
That it was just my confidence being low.

It is now I begin to realize,
I was born for loving you,
And in my heart I know,
That forever we'll be true.

                       
                                        By Zak. B (Zelleon)
©2004-2009 ~Zelleon
:iconzelleon:

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Free style.. romance..type
All parts of this deviation belong to myself Zak. B (Zelleon)

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:iconarschloch:
Very nice! :+fav:

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As I was going up the stair
I met a man who wasn't there
He wasn't there again today
I wish, I wish he'd stay away.
:iconzelleon:
Thankyou v.much

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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget

"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically
"

110705
:iconmylittleworld:
I love it! Very good!! =D

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Love is like the wind, I can't see it, but I can feel it. :heart:
:iconzelleon:
Thankyou :hug:

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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget

"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically
"

110705
:iconpiratewh0re:
awww!! thats cute ^_^, great work
:iconkairin:
*bows down*

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"No matter what happens, even if you become the world's enemy, I'll be your knight."
"The people and friends we have lost, or the dreams that have faded... Never forget them..."
:iconmylittleworld:
You're welcome! :cuddle: *

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Love is like the wind, I can't see it, but I can feel it. :heart:
:iconkuraikage:
*aw's* This is so sweet and... and... aww worthy :3

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From now on I'm asexual... except for that whole 'reproducing with myself' part...
:icondementeddoll:
very nice! i really like your style of writing..all your short + sweet poemsies! ^^... you seem to be fond of romance poems so >>' if you like seeing other poets work...and my friend anne ish one as well..her poems are all about love..but..they are soo amazing go look! ~KOKitten

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Drip...Drip...A sink full of blood...A human hanging up above....Drip...Drip...Out of sight....Always in the night....
:blackrose: :skullbones:
:iconlenniepoo:
aww how sweet :) wonderful poem :D

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